This story is a Twilight Zone type story that I wrote a few years ago. No contest wins and it needs a little polish. Tell me what you think. Is it too confusing?
Like most days in life, at least my life it was a pleasant and uneventful day. The city park was two blocks away down Central Avenue, through the heart of this Midwestern town of Longdale. I enjoyed living there. It had an upbeat vibe. No one seemed to be a stranger and it was very safe. My door could be left open without any worries. Despite having lived here for only six months, I had a few friends with similar interest. We met regularly to discuss the latest book or sometimes spent a few hours hiking one of the many nature trails. After being widowed my life had changed. Moving here was the best thing I could have done. Despite it’s being small, compared to the likes of Chicago, St. Louis or Atlanta, everything I’ve ever needed or wanted was here. At least, that’s how I described it to others.
Taking an occasional day off for no reason is something I liked to do and did more often this past summer. I aired up the tires on my cruiser bike, hopped on to ride to the park with a coffee stop at Java the Hut. The park had an easy seven-mile trail, meandering around ball fields, past the golf course, and through a forested area. Along with my coffee, I brought a book, always a book. I took one everywhere I went. It was the lifeline to my imagination.
On this day I rode the trail to a bench, near the Indian Hawthorn bushes, parked my bike and sat down with my coffee to read. This was the quiet part of the park. Most of the activity was near the golf course or ball fields. I felt good, thinking I got a little exercise for my body, now I would exercise my mind with a good read. I didn’t need an exciting life just a purposeful one.
This novel by Norvel Thomas, My Alternate Reality was about unsolved mysteries, originally published in 1783, over one hundred years ago. It contained eyewitness reports about real-life thrillers. I liked these types of stories, mainly non-fiction about true-life events. Mysteries are all around us in big cities and small towns all over the world. Most people didn’t take time to notice because they’re too involved in everyday life. Even this town of Longdale, my adopted town, had an obscure secret, but that is something I was unaware of at the time.
The afternoon flew by with the pleasant weather and my book of intrigue. I barely noticed anything, not even a dog or squirrel. If it wasn’t for my stomach growling and the sun setting, I might have read into the night.
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It had been a great day, but I needed to get home. I planned to pick up a sandwich on the way and continue my reading once I got home. The ride back was easy, but odd in a couple of ways. As I passed the golf course, I saw no golfers or carts. I knew it was getting late, but it wasn’t dark yet so the empty golf course was shocking. The same was true with the ball fields. There were no cars in the parking lot. I had never ridden past the ball fields without seeing someone in the parking lot if only drinking one last beer before they headed home. My spine tingled as if a spirit jumped at me from behind a tree.
Everything looked unchanged, but the silence was unnerving as I rode down Central Avenue toward Main Street. It seemed like there was an absence of life in Longdale. The shops were empty, lifeless as if they were just storefronts on some Hollywood set. Where were my friends? Usually any day of the week I could find one or more of them at our hangout drinking an espresso while debating the latest hot topic. But, it too was empty. The quiet produced an eerie silence that chilled me to the bones. My hunger dissipated by the distraction of nothingness I saw in my town.
I expected to wake at any moment in a cold sweat, realizing my fascination with mysteries had penetrated my dreams, but little did I know this was my new reality. It became immediately apparent when entering my apartment. I found everything to be too perfect for my personality. The furnishings were familiar, but nothing was out of place. It was like no one lived here.
I picked up the phone receiver to call a friend and heard a voice. It sounded like my own voice. I replied but received no response, no acknowledgment at all. I yelled into the phone but it made no difference. I listened intently. It was my voice on the line but not my words I heard, rather my thoughts. Every thought that came into my mind, I heard on the phone repeated back to me. Petrified with fear I collapsed to the floor, lying there dazed and confused, unable to move a single muscle. I drifted in and out of consciousness for hours.
In my foggy mental state, barely knowing my name, Samuel Coan. I felt different, not myself. My features looked strange in the mirror, somewhat familiar but odd in most ways.
My book lying on the floor was open to page 178, to the chapter entitled, “Alternate personalities and Alternate Worlds.” This seemed meaningful but why?
I left the building and immediately noticed a difference in the town. People scurrying around were dressed in period clothing like you would’ve seen in the 1700s. I was recognized and greeted by many, but not by my given name. The buildings were there but the shops were different. A General store took the place of the coffee shop and sat next to a tobacco, cigar and snuff store. The entire street was buzzing with activity but of another era. It was a strange feeling but pleasant in a way. As I walked down the street, I felt an odd comfort that my life belonged in this town and in this time.
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Moving was stressful, but this town of Longdale had been welcoming, and I had my books. My new job will start in a week, so there was time to get familiar with the surroundings. A walk through the park was pleasant with the fragrance from Lilies of the Valley filling the air. My book on mysteries gave me comfort. I found a bench in a secluded part of the park and sipped my coffee as I read. The title My Alternate Reality Samuel Coan, the name that sounds familiar for some reason. The book was published in 1783, over one hundred years ago, but it still seemed relevant. Someday, I would like to write a book. It would be fulfilling to see my name Norvel Thomas as an author.
It was a quiet, uneventful day and I started to dose. I awakened abruptly to stark unearthly silence. And so began again another recycled life . . .